I am taking examination paper of 73 minutes to go on the way home, as if fell into abyss, all round inky, let me dare be not moved easily. Imperceptible in, walked along door mouth, I feel I was introduced to dock, the person rebuke below the stage is worn I, want to look for a ground to seam really get, also do not come out again.
我拿着七十三分的考卷走在回家的路上，仿佛掉进了万丈深渊，周围漆黑一片，让我一动都不敢动。不知不觉中，走到了家门口，我感觉自己被推上了被告席，台下的人训斥着我，真想找个地缝钻进去，再也不出来。
I stood in the doorway to hesitate a little while, it is to fear really in the heart, stood a little while again, the body begins pins and needles. "73 " this number, brand was become in my heart, engrave in my heart deeply. I open the door, walk into a room, weep silently; I push a window, want to change a state of mind. The sky is cloudy, had issued rain. Wind is worn in howl, blow on my cheek, cut same ache like the knife. Rain issues bigger more, develop a window, "Bang bang " hit on my body, my heart thinks: Is this my mood? The car outside is increasing, whole and street the world that is a car. Pluvial bead is on the leaf scamper about, they are extremely happy.出自 wwW.zuoWEnBA.nEt
我站在门口犹豫了一会儿，心里实在是害怕，又站了一会儿，身体开始发麻。“七十三”这个数字，在我心中成了烙印，深深地刻在了我的心里。我打开门，走进房间，默默地流泪；我推开窗户，想换一个心情。天空乌云密布，已经下起了雨。风在呼啸着，吹在我的脸颊上，像刀割一样的疼痛。雨越下越大，冲进窗户，“啪啪”打在我身上，我心想：这不就是我的心情吗？外面的车辆越来越多，整个街道都是车的世界。雨珠在树叶上蹦蹦跳跳，它们极其开心。
I heard footstep, close a window, wipe tear.
我听见了脚步声，关上窗户，把眼泪擦干。
The mother pushs the door and enter, the examination paper that looks at me 73 minutes that. I also couldn't help again, the eye turns on the water like faucet. The mother is touching my head, light tone is comforting me. I think she can scold me originally, hit me. My erase tear, the mother laughs slightly to me, give me topic of the speech then. I do not know maternal meaning, I was taken an examination of seven, still laugh to me for what? The mother laughs to me again, I understood: Maternal smile gives me warmth like sunshine, let my encouraged.
母亲推门而入，看着我那七十三分的考卷。我再也忍不住了，眼睛像水龙头一样放水。母亲抚摸着我的头，轻声安慰着我。我本以为她会骂我、打我。我擦掉泪水，母亲冲我微微一笑，接着给我讲题。我不知道母亲的意思，我考了七十几了，为啥还冲我笑？母亲又冲我笑，我明白了：母亲的笑容像阳光一样给我温暖，让我鼓足勇气。
Be, if do not have maternal smile, I am the small grass of lone one individual plant in snow ground. The mother resembles sunshine same, melt the snow all round, make me active up. I hear maternal topic of the speech seriously. Mother! Thank you to encourage me with smile, change me, let my thrive.
是啊，如果没有母亲的笑容，我就是雪地里孤零零的一株小草。母亲就像阳光一样，融化周围的雪，让我积极向上。我认真地听母亲讲题。母亲！谢谢你用笑容来鼓励我，改变我，让我茁壮成长。